A couple of examples of cargo hold count screen descriptions that would benefit from name formatting (this is great, thanks for adding it).
"You have a reactive armor in your cargo hold" would be more consistent with standard naming if it read" You have a segment of reactive armor in..." Similarly from "You have 2 cerallox ore..." to "You have 2 tons of cerallox ore in...".

The last example could read "You have 5 barrels of grade A grains in your cargo hold and have enough room to carry 69 more."

This adds "barrels of" and combines both into one sentence.